Walt:present instructions with pictures
what is your favourite cereal and why?
anyway have a nice day or night were ever you may be in this world
by trinity
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Holland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Kia ora Trinity, great job on creating a visual infographic that teaches us how to make cereal. It may seem like an easy task but some children find it hard, your instructions will help with this.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used adverbs and imperative verbs as well as time connectives.
My favourite cereal would have to be Nutri-Grain I think, though I haven't had it in years. What is your favourite cereal?
hi miss Holland thank you for the feedback and i got to admit i like Nutri-Grain as well hope have a nice day an once again thank you
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