Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Holland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 26 May 2021
7 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Trinity, my name is Lottie, I am a year younger than you, and in the same class.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog because of the way you explained 2 of the types of Figurative Languages, and your examples. I think I should’ve done a slideshow for mine because that’s so much easier. I think you could have checked your writing before you post maybe.
Did you think about adding some colour?
Hola Trinity, It's Raima, your classmate.
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote a good example. I did the same post as yours with my other friend.
Next time I recommend you put a title at the start of your slideshow and a more resoponsable title of your blog, and have more examples.
Did you enjoy making this blog post?
hola Raima,classmate
Deletethank you for the suggestion
anyway have a sussy day ;)
ReplyDeleteHi Trinity, I liked your blog post about onomatopoeia and hyperbole. I got a better understanding of what they are. Maybe next time you could add more colour to make it stand out a bit more. But I think that it was a good explanation.
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DeleteHello Trinity, I'm Holly. I'm in the same grade as you. I'm from NBC and I love you.
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog post because you take so much time and dedication to listen to the teacher and actually get your work done.Next time maybe add more examples so I can understand more. I learned about onomatopoeia too.
Is ringringrong also an onomatopoeia?
hello there Holly me beloved <3
Deletethank you so much for this comment your such a smart amazing person thank you once again for this <#