Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Holland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 19 June 2019
nbc nets win again
today for winter sport the new Brighton nets won against Queens park (😀woo hoo) anyway we all had a blast thank you Queens park for having good sportsman ship towards our team
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Whoa! Good photo. I really like how in the end you still thank the other team for having good sportsman ship. It would be easier to read if you had some punctuation and gave more story about what happened, etc was it hard or really easy? Anyways I really like your reflection and hope you make more.
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