Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Holland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 31 May 2019
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2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
I like that you have very descriptive writing about your family.
ReplyDeleteI very nice of you to write about someone else then family.
Next time make your writing a bit bigger because I cant really read some of it.
I am glad you are talking about yourself and your family, it tells me more about yourself.
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